Black Ghost

Oh, I loved this in TSR and I love it here too.

The frolicking pony is very pretentious so he always skipped around trees. When suddenly groundhogs attacked nearby settlers who were smoking some turkeys. Howling winds blasted rifles, the men graspe

That's what I'd look like if I looked like that.

If you look at it long enough you can see the genius.

10/10 I like that.

I actually thought this was a pretty cool story, I hope you write more of it. “And stupidity even more so, so how about we think before acting,” scoffed Vassis, ...

The frolicking pony is very pretentious so he always skipped around trees. When suddenly groundhogs attacked nearby settlers who were smoking some

The frolicking pony is very pretentious so he always skipped around trees. When suddenly groundhogs attacked nearby settlers who

I thought you got the meaning across very well in this poem.

The frolicking pony is very pretentious so

Not much too change in this....well done!

The frolicking pony

I liked this, except you should take the poll off at the top, it's just silly.

O.O I like the true blue, thanks Bobo!

Thanks again everyone who took the time to read this! :D I just wanted to tell you all that I've rewritten this and I think it's a lot better than ...